Very nice. Really liked the lead in for the story. Also, just watched the YouTube video... absolutely fantastic!!! Very nice video editing, and very... realistic... for lack of a better word at the moment. Can't wait to see how the story unfolds.
Yeah, I'm still amazed at the Youtube video. She really is something else, isn't she? I'm glad you liked the lead in to the story and will keep reviewing whenever I post more chapters. Thanks for leaving a comment, it means a lot. :D
I'm really enjoying this story! Can't wait to read more of it!
I'm glad you're really enjoying this story. :D I hope you like the rest of it whenever I post it. :) Thanks for leaving a comment.
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I hope you'll like the rest of the story. :)
Guhhhhh, I've been waiting for you to post this fic ever since I saw the trailer on youtube! I'm very excited to see where this is all going to head. You have the characters spot on, even Castle's little facial expressions. I loved how he brought them all coffee and now they think he's a crazy stalker! I hope you keep this updated, because I'm really really curious as to where it goes. ~ Kkarrie
Thank you! :D Keeping them all in-character is one factor I pride myself on. ;) I'm glad I got his facial expressions right - I've watched them enough. ;) :P I'm planning on posting the next chapter some time after lunch today. (I have a Physics exam this morning in an hour or so. ;)) Thanks so much again! Your comment really means a lot to me.
Great so far. You got me interested.
Thank you. :) I'm glad I could capture your interest.
Thank you. :)
Awww! Thank you so much. I'm glad you like it so far. I hope you'll come back for more every time I post a new chapter. I'm planning on posting chapter 1 some time after lunch (my time) on Thursday (4-21). I've got a Physics final in the morning... thanks so much for your comment. It means a lot to me. :D
Ehm, how don't they know who he is, I mean, the guy's a famous writer. And what about Beckett? Wasn't she a fan of "the genre" before she met him in person?
Maybe with a slight change to the ending, for example "they know who he is, they just don't remember ever meeting him and working alongside him", it could work better.
She's a fan of "the genre" and him, but they never met him before. Beckett's been engrossed in her cases and it doesn't click who he is - and Ryan and Esposito didn't read his books, so they don't know who he is in this alternate world. When I said "don't know who he is" - I meant on a personal level, not not knowing him because he's famous. I hope that makes sense. And I hope that you'll decide to keep reading and reviewing if you so choose. : Thanks for leaving a comment. I do appreciate it. :)
This is amazing!
I loved it so far and my heart was totally breaking for Castle as he made his way out of the precinct.
It's a great idea and I believe there will be awesome stuff to deal with.
I'm looking forward to the next chapters.
I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. I hope you like the awesome stuff they have to deal with. ;) And I hope you like the next chapters and the rest of the stories. I really appreciate you leaving a comment, it means a lot. :)