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I really enjoyed this story, it had just enough of everything. It was well written and flowed nicely. I think it would be a great idea to write a story about Castle being kidnapped for the same reason as Beckett. You a talented writer and Ilook forward to reading more of your stories. Don't take to long to post the one about Castle being kidnapped- I can't wait to read it.
Loved the ending of this chapter. It is typical Castle. Beckett was expecting one recation, but he gave her an out and pushed the conversation in anohter direction, sparing her having to answer somerthing that would make her uncomfortable.
You definitely nailed the ending. I thought that Demming was protrayed slightly out of character in the story, though. He doesn't like Castle much, but in the show, it appears that he has recognised Castle as an asset that has good insight. I just felt that he would not have refused to even listen to Castle in that situation, with Kate kidnapped. It did help make the story flow, though. So, it worked in context to this story.
Overall, the story was very well thought out and organized. The only issue I would have as an editor is what I wrote above. I thought that you could have reached the same bullet points in the story, yet kept from portraying Demming, who I personally despise in the show, as a complete ass.
Again, don't take anything above as criticism. I am merely trying to critique your story as if I were your editor. It is an area that is inconsistent with past representations of a character, so it is the editor's job to inform the writer of this. As a stand alone story, this works very well and Demming's actions feel very believable. It is only when basing his past actions on this story that any discrepancies appear.
I greeatly enjoyed the story and look forward to more from you.
Oh Castle's 'Christmas Tree moment'. love it.
Doing fine so well oh and it's called the missing persons unit.
Please add the last chapter soon. This is great.
It's only me again. Nice chapter. Liked the section about him having her Mother's ring. And the mouse, that was pretty funny except the cup crashing made her bang her head. I'm recovering from surgery last week, and can't do too much except read so that let's me be on the alert for new chapters. I'm looking forward to what you dream up next.
Its not "only" you lol. I look forward to your reviews each time I write something. Him giving her her mother's ring was pretty much the scene that inspired this whole story. Though, when I was planning this the scene was a little different and a little more emotional because Demming was there but, I'm pretty happy with the way it actually came out.
The mouse bit was totally random but fit very well lol. Oh wow, I hope it wasn't to serious of a surgery? And I hope that you are recovering well? I'll see if I cant write some more chapters (on my other stories, and the final one for this one) soon to give you something to read ;)
Ouch! She's on the warpath. I hope they make Demming look like an idiot. Just sayin' lol
Ewww....mice. But they did work well in the story. I can't wait to read what happens next. I have a few theories but I look forward to how this plays out.
Haha, maybe one of your theories will turn out to be right. We will just have to see lol. Shouldn't be too long before you get to find out if you are right or not.
It would make sense for you to add mice. The kind of place she's held in seems like a place that would have mice. Also it's suppose to be scary, gross, dark place so I think it works. I wonder why her attacker took her watch. He didn't get her because he was interested in her and he's jealous of Castle having her so if he can't have her then Castle can't either. I like that Beckett thinks that Castle would find what she left behind. If I was really hungry I would take the food even though it would be less appealing in those conditions. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
I thought I reviewed this chapter but I guess I didn't. I love happy ending too so I don't mind. I think those are really good questions to make the reader think about. I'm actually now trying to think about it. Very curious to find out what happens. I think the letter was planted and it might be to throw them off. But that's my idea. A though he might have given the hint and hid it and made it seem like he was trying to throw them off. Though I think they won't find any fingerprints, if the guy was smart enough to wear gloves.
Lol, I think you reviewed on FF.net but either way is fine! If you had waited a few more minutes I would have had the next chapter up haha!
I hope Castle is the one to figure this out and can be her knight in shining armour. I too, love happy endings! I'm looking forward to the rest of the story!
you've got a good idea going here, there are a few ways you could go with it. Good luck!
Thank you! Yes there are a number of ways I could go with this and I have a decently complicated plot/case planned out for it so I hope you will look forward to more!
Good start, please keep at it. I know writing mystery is hard, balancing between too obvious and too convoluted.
Thank you! Yes it is hard to write a mystery. I think I might be able to do a fairly good job of it. I've actually had to outline the whole story for this one which is something I should have done with my other stories but never did. I've got the mystery all planned out now I just have to figure out how to write it out in the chapters lol! But, I've been working on the next chapter so hopefully it will be posted sometime soon. Thank you for reviewing!
I do like the story...I love a good mystery and so far I like where this is going. This is fanfic...go for it!
Thank you! This is the first time I have attempted to write my own case though so I hope that it won't turn out too bad lol!
I like the story so far. I'm sorry that you aren't feeling up to writing more on this story.
I'll write more, I'm just not sure if I can pull it off or not lol! But since people seem to like it, I am going to try my best! Hope you will look forward to more.