Scheme is a good way to put it! Yay! I am finally getting email alerts when I get reviews on here again! Thanks for reading!
You definitely have the voices for Lanie and Kate down. Very well done.
keep writing that's a great storyline! :P
Normally I would think she would have trouble lieing to Castle like that but it seems that recently she has been branching out on her own a little bit, doing things that she wants to do. (like bringing that guy home and going off to the summer program) So she thinks its best if she doesn't tell him right now (and I'll explain more of her reasoning in the next chapter) But, she can't lie to him forever XD
*giggles* I absolutely loved the guys being all jumpy over Lanie. The mental image was awesome. :D And poor Castle ... OF COURSE Gina wouldn't lie to him about Alexis. *facepalm*
Loving this so far; keep it up!!
I Like this story and look forward to more.
The dream scene is awesome! And Castle needs to smack Gina upside the head and get rid of her FAST! I'm really liking this story!
That's exactly how I pictured Castle dealing with not having his phone and internet. Wow, the dream turned out great. Those scenes you picked out for the dream worked perfectly. Yum, french toast. Now I want some. I guess it isn't good to read fanfiction so late but I had to read your new chapter and I needed something to distract me. My paper was giving me a headache. Castle was just what the doctor ordered, haha. I liked how Lanie was trying to interrogate her to find out why Beckett seemed different. Dreams are always important, and I agree I don't think he sees it that way either. A happy writer, makes a happy reader and reviewer!
I'm really enjoying this story. It's cool to see Beckett and Alexis bond. I feel so sorry for Castle, though--Gina is an ice queen. But, please keep it coming! Can't wait to read more :)
Haha another caffine fix for you.
Great story so far, had no trouble visualising the tale, the actions of Kate and Alexis were spot on.
Keep it up, will look for the next chapter
Caffeine! Yay! Thank you! And I am very happy to hear you had no trouble visualizing what was happening. Thanks for reviewing!
Ah, Castle and Beckett will talk some time soon they way I have it planned it might not be for a few more chapters but don't worry there will definitely be some Caskett going on. But there will be more Kate and Alexis time in the next chapter as she starts working at the precinct.
Gina is really mean and that's putting it mildly. Kate is feeling deserted by Castle and her anxiety is causing her to relive the explosion where he rescued her,and then comforting her when Coonan almost killed Castle. I think she feels overwhelmed so the water is coming in and fear of drowning. My thoughts anyways. Definitely enjoying it. At least she has Alexis that is definitely helping her.
Loved this new chapter! I can't wait to see the next part!
This is a great idea! Very IC so far ... Haha I wonder what Castle will say at the end. ;)
Can't wait for more!
I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I'll tell you more when I e-mail you. I thought it was Monkey Bunky but I'm not sure about that either. I think there will be chapters that will be different than others but each of them are just as important for the reader.
Yes, It will be interesting once Castle finds out which will probably be a little while before he finds out as I have a few things planned before then XD
Nice chapter..I like the Alexis/Kate bonding so far. I do believe Monkey Bunky is right. I have fond memories of the "opposite ends" thing!!! I grew up in a large military family with lots of sisters and aunts and cousins.....many times there were more than 2 in a bed!
This was fun. It would be great for them to do some girly stuff...shopping, manicures...hang out with Lanie. Alexis could teach Kate how to cook!!!!!
I enjoyed this chapter. I was how I was expecting it would be but even better. I like that bit about Lanie. I think it works. I can't wait to see what they end up doing at Beckett's place and how Castle will react. Will Alexis come by the precinct. I'm not sure what Alexis and Beckett could do exactly but it would be cool for them to hang out at her work, watch movies at her place, take Alexis to a favorite spot of Beckett's or something that reminds Beckett of her past or something that reminds Alexis of her past. Okay that was more ideas than I thought I had. I can't wait for the next chapter. I was happy to see this one come so quickly.
Awesome. I love seeing Beckett and Alexis interact. We don't see that enough in the show. I would like it if you continue and maybe add a bit of Caskett. I think it would be great in the next chapter have them planning out to get her out of the summer program and actually doing just that. Maybe having her stay at her place for a while.
I do believe you are a mind reader! And yes, you are right we don't see enough of that in the show but I hope we will in season 3.
Yes there will be some Caskett but not for a while. After all, he does have to come back some time but for a while the story will focus on Kate and Alexis during the summer. And by 'for a while' I mean until I run out of ideas for things for them to do during the summer haha!
Yup! Thats how I planned for the next chapter to go and yes lets just say that neither Kate nor Alexis feel comfortable about Alexis staying by herself for the whole summer XD
I'd love to hear it if you have any suggestions of things you'd like to see happen in this story.
i think beckett should be more upset over the whole castle/gina thing but overall it was really good i think u should keep on writing it
Yes, I understand that, and I imagine thats probably how it will actually happen in the series its just that I thought I would do things a little different. Keeping Kate's character in mind, I could see it happening this way too. She will be more upset later on when she has to deal with her feelings for him more though. Thank you for reading!